Comments on: Commentary #1 (of 28): “COWBOYS AND INDIANS”

By: Joker

Joker — Sat, 14 Mar 2009 10:18:16 +0000

Your brother gravitates to crazy girls. That girl friend was one of the craziest. There’s more than one person locked up in that head of her’s. By the way, this story is my favorite.

By: Christian A. Dumais

Christian A. Dumais — Thu, 12 Mar 2009 12:35:56 +0000

Murrsea: I remember you being there. You were around for the unwritten epilogue when we returned to my brother’s place. Little did we know our night was just beginning…

By: murrsea

murrsea — Tue, 10 Mar 2009 16:55:20 +0000

I remember this night vividly. Especially the falling down the stairs bit. It is all collected in my brain for I am “The Watcher”.

By: Christian A. Dumais

Christian A. Dumais — Tue, 10 Mar 2009 12:00:48 +0000

MateuszB: Thanks for giving the book a chance and I hope the rest of the book is to your liking.

FuriousD: While some of the stories were changed here and there, I decided to leave the published stories as they were originally printed in the magazines. The only exception is “Kicking Love’s Ass”, which I published in ERLC as one story instead it being split into two parts.

As for the ex-girlfriend part of the story, I’m not even sure if I actually wrote it or had it in my notes. Either way, it was clear that her involvement in the story wasn’t necessary.

Thanks for writing.

By: FuriousD

FuriousD — Mon, 09 Mar 2009 14:00:45 +0000

Now that space was not as big of an issue, were you tempted to put the part about the truck/ex-girlfriend back in or did you feel the need to keep it as it was originally published?

By: mateuszb

mateuszb — Sun, 08 Mar 2009 20:33:55 +0000

This story got my attention immediately with the very few sentences and boy, I was not disappointed. It’s a good one, especially when you start connecting the dots and realize that this might not all be a fiction. Although I was not sure about this at the time of reading it, I am now, which is even more exciting to know this kind of story really took place. Bravo to the author for immersing the reader in his world,condemnation for making him miss several busses home.